Monday, September 26, 2011

The Second One.

       He saw the orange glow that was resting in front of himself. It was a cool autumn day and Dave was over caffeinated.
       "What's this glare?" Dave asked his girlfriend.
        She was a slim girl, around 24-24. She wasn't telling. 
       "Hell if I know." she said with her eyes closed and falling asleep. 
      Dave's hands gripped the wheel as hard a she could and wondered what her saw in this woman. 
       "Can't you just play along and stop fighting me with everything?" uttered Dave. He was tired of the bickering that would dominate their relationship. "It's just an orange hue that I can't figure out."
       "I'm going to sleep, Dave. Leave me alone."
         Dave felt annoyed and turned the next corner so hard that his girlfriend was pushed to one side of the seat. 
         Dave looked over, took off his sunglasses and said, "Sorry, did I wake you?"
 

     
 

1 comment:

  1. This is hilarious. Do these people deserve each other? The dialogue is strong and the punctuation is perfect. Keep writing....

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